MY INTRODUCTION….
Though you maybe as cold as ice,
(Ummm….I thinks you said you like rice).
Tall, white skin, and good-looking is what you be,
I’ll bet you could whip my ass playin the PS3.
Funny, sweet, and kind of raw is what you are,
(Hey, did you see that movie Avatar!?)
Into sports, variety in music, and young you is,
Fuck age, with all these characteristics, you’re hot with extra fizz!!
No, no…really I just wanted to bring your face to a smile,
But I’ll bet there’s a lot more words I can say that I could add to this pile…
WHEN IT GOT SERIOUS....
Eight o’ clock is when his body rises
But his sun is high all the day and night long
To him I have yet to tell any lies
He’s precious and delicate, to him, I would do no wrong
He inspires me to write, but all the literature is about him
I have no understanding, but yet, questions of where my feelings stem
There is almost a bit of embarrassment in the air
So to want more and take away from him, to him it wouldn't be fair
From obscure reasons he has put me under his capture
However its glass-like territory that I must be careful not to fracture
Why must I have this bolding spirit, always putting everything out on the line?
Don’t be worried or concern, lift the pressure, you’ll be just fine
Maybe I should slow down and forget all about it
Because I’m 99 percent sure he’s not even thinking about it
I might as well back off, as I look to shame
Please just say those magic words, and I’ll refrain
So this is it, I hit you with another play
Who knows what the next scene may be, but I’m prepared for him to give her away
mmmmmmmmmmk
ReplyDeleteAnd what does this "mmmmmmmmmmk" supposed to mean???
ReplyDeleteOK lol wtf da 1st part is kinda silly So wht da 2nd part gotta do wit da 1st part?
ReplyDeleteWell "The Same", the first part was meant to be like an 'ice-breaker', in a way. It was meant to make someone laugh, or at least smile, so yeah its kinda silly. (it was when i first discovered i liked this boy, i was so excited and overjoyed that i just had to write about liking him. i took what i knew about him and just made a poem from those things....
ReplyDelete...The second part is when things gotten serious, as in my feelings becoming more and more for him. He's three years younger than I, and i didnt want him to feel as if i was taking advantage of him, hence the "However its glass-like territory that I must be careful not to fracture" line. Because i havent felt anything for anyone in years, i couldnt understand why i was liking him so much, which was the "He inspires me to write, but all the literature is about him.I have no understanding, but yet, questions of where my feelings stem' parts
ReplyDeleteI responded to your other comments as well
(thnx)
ReplyDelete& i get it. u write beautiful words, but ur last comment from the "no beginning to end" 1, UR NOT! & then i nocited wat u did recently. U 'dedicated' an enitire piece about him using the rhcp...i noticed dat shit & it was tight as hell. ur talented, but u wastein it on sum1 who aint shit. u can write 4 me netime ;p And 4 u 2 respond 2 this 1, hving so much 2 say, that shows where yo heart @